MUSIC

1.I listen to music everyday whenever I walk the street and back and forth between school and home.

>> I listen to music every day whenever I walk on the street, back and forth between school and home.

Actually, I don’t sing often because listening music is better and I don’t go that much karaoke as well.

>> Actually, I don’t sing often because listening to music is much better and I don’t go that much karaoke as well.

 2. I almost listen all kinds of songs except for hip hop music.

>>  I almost listen to all kinds of songs except for hip hop music.

 It’s because hip hop focus on lyrics so I can’t feel tone.

>> It’s because hip hop focuses on lyrics so I can’t feel the connection.

However, I like listening pop songs most. I also like movie background music.

>> However, I like listening to pop songs the most. I also like movies theme songs.

These days, Aladdin and Beauty and the beast songs are the best of my songs.

>> These days, Aladdin and Beauty and the beast songs are the best songs for me.

 3.Playing music occupy many parts of life because it can change our emotions and help to relieve our stress.

>>  3.Playing music occupy many parts of a persons life because it can change our emotions and help relieve our stress.

When it comes to my case, I listen to music when I take a shower, make up, and do not anything.

>> In my case, I listen to music when I take a shower, I do my make up, and do anything.

 Also, there are many people who listen to music on the street.

>> Also, there are many people who listens to music on the street.

 4. I usually listen to music for an hour a day.

>> Correct.

It depends on from day to day because sometimes I want a quiet, sometimes I really want to listen to music.

>> It depends from day to day because sometimes I want a quiet day while sometimes, I really want to listen to music.

Plus, whenever new songs are released, I play music a lot.

>> Correct.