Music for learning a language.

2017-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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If you work out physically, your spirit will be clear. This is a indication of the relationship between physical and mental. Some say that music makes person's emotion purify. And also, music(especially sing a song) relieve a stress and prevent dementia. It is a already widely accepted that music is a good way to learn language. Because music stimulates the area of brain which handles language. Music is easy to sing along and stays in memory for a long time. When I was a middle school student 40 years ago, my friend said "I hope all books are made up of music". The friend sang loudly in the classroom. But his grades were always low. Because all books were not composed of the music. Just the fact that we can remember songs for a long time shows us that song is a good way to learn a language. However, that's all about being young. As I get older, all memory was blurred.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!(\",)

Another thing is music works when you are into it. I mean, if you are not really interested in singing or any other form of music, it won\'t be an effective tool to learn a new langue. Just my opinion. Do you agree? Thank you for sending in your composition regularly. I enjoy reading them. Keep it up!

Take care!(\",)

~T. Lynn   

If you work out physically, your spirit will be clear.

>> correct!

This is a indication of the relationship between physical and mental.

>> This is an indication of the relationship between the physical and mental.

Some say that music makes person\'s emotion purify.

>> Some say that music can purify one\'s emotion.

And also, music(especially sing a song) relieve a stress and prevent dementia.

>> And also, music(especially singing a song) relieves stress and prevents dementia.

 It is a already widely accepted that music is a good way to learn language.

>> correct!

Because music stimulates the area of brain which handles language.

>> Because music stimulates the area of the brain which handles language.

Music is easy to sing along and stays in memory for a long time.

>> correct!

When I was a middle school student 40 years ago, my friend said \"I hope all books are made up of music\".

>> correct!

That friend sang loudly in the classroom.

>> correct!

But his grades were always low.

>> correct!

Because all books were not composed of the music.

>> Because not all books were composed of music.

Just the fact that we can remember songs for a long time shows us that singing is a good way to learn a language.

>> correct!

However, that\'s all about being young.

>> However, that\'s true when I was young.

 As I get older, all memory was blurred.

>> As I get older, all memories are blurred.

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