Music for learning a language.
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Hi there [이름]!(\",)
Another thing is music works when you are into it. I mean, if you are not really interested in singing or any other form of music, it won\'t be an effective tool to learn a new langue. Just my opinion. Do you agree? Thank you for sending in your composition regularly. I enjoy reading them. Keep it up!
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~T. Lynn
If you work out physically, your spirit will be clear.
>> correct!
This is a indication of the relationship between physical and mental.
>> This is an indication of the relationship between the physical and mental.
Some say that music makes person\'s emotion purify.
>> Some say that music can purify one\'s emotion.
And also, music(especially sing a song) relieve a stress and prevent dementia.
>> And also, music(especially singing a song) relieves stress and prevents dementia.
It is a already widely accepted that music is a good way to learn language.
>> correct!
Because music stimulates the area of brain which handles language.
>> Because music stimulates the area of the brain which handles language.
Music is easy to sing along and stays in memory for a long time.
>> correct!
When I was a middle school student 40 years ago, my friend said \"I hope all books are made up of music\".
>> correct!
That friend sang loudly in the classroom.
>> correct!
But his grades were always low.
>> correct!
Because all books were not composed of the music.
>> Because not all books were composed of music.
Just the fact that we can remember songs for a long time shows us that singing is a good way to learn a language.
>> correct!
However, that\'s all about being young.
>> However, that\'s true when I was young.
As I get older, all memory was blurred.
>> As I get older, all memories are blurred.
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