MUSIC,HOBBY

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5. Fist, it can help to improve experience to find out our interests so it will be able to our major.

>>  First, it can help improve a person\'s experience to find out their interests that can also help find the right major for them.

For this way we can also clean our mind.

>> By doing this, we can have our mind refreshed.

I had learned instruments so I can play when I don’t have anything to do and my emotion is getting better.

>> I studied playing some instruments so I use them whenever I feel bad and it improves my mood.

 6. Western music style impact our music style.

>> Western music genre can have great impact in our lives.

 It’s because I usually listen to classic music, I think it is more peaceful and calmness.

>>  It’s because I usually listen to classical music. I think it sounds peaceful and calm.

Also, by introducing western music, each country’s music and western music styles can be integrated.

>> Also, by introducing western music to ourselves, we can integrate it together with our music genre in our lives.

 1. My hobby was figure skating but now I’m not doing because of study to go to the university.

>> My hobby before was figure skating. But now, I do not figure skate because I need to study to go to university.

So these days I often watch movies or dramas almost everyday.

>> So these days I often watch movies or dramas almost every day. 

After I watch these, my mind is refreshed and I can sleep well.

>> Correct.

 2. When I stop skating I did exercise every weekday, but It was hard to maintain my study.

>> When I stopped skating, I exercised every weekday, but it became hard for me to maintain my studies.

So I began watching movies or dramas when I entered the high school.

>> So I began watching movies or dramas when I entered high school.

 It is helpful to study hard in terms of time management and efficiency of reducing stress.

>> Correct.