Music is a great way for learning a language.
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Actually, everyone has his/her own way or style of learning. Some are Visual learners so they learn better by looking at pictures or watching videos. Some are Aural or auditory-musical so they prefer sound and music to learn. There are also Verbal learners who learn better by using words, both in speech and writing. So I think the most important thing is to know your own learning style. Thank you for submitting your composition. You did an excellent job. Keep it up!(\",)
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I am not sure that the music is the greatest way for learning a language.
>> correct!
OR>> I\'m not sure if music is the best way of learning a language.
Because it is not easy to catch what the lyrics is in the music.
>> correct!
OR>> Because it\'s hard to understand the lyrics of the song.
It depends on what kind of music we listen.
>> It depends on what kind of music we listen to.
It has a fast beat when we listen to the dance music.
>> correct!
It makes people not to understand what the music means.
>> It confuses people on what the music/lyrics means.
I heard many times about the good way to learn english with pops.
>> I heard many times about the good way to learn English with pop songs.
However, I found out that there are a lot of figurative expressions and words in the music.
>> correct!
It can be the reason that people stop learning english.
>> It can be the reason that people stop learning English.
OR>> It must be the reason why some people stop learning English.
I think learning english with watching video is better than listening music.
>> I think learning English with watching videos is better than listening to music.
Because we can guess what a character in the movie says with his / her impression.
>> correct!
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