Music power is so strong
학생이 쓴 원문
There\'s a song that I\'m really into these days.
The song is \'When I\'m still getting over you\'.
Singer is Peter Elias. I love his voice.
It\'s really soft and strong.
Sometimes make me cry and make a smile.
Music power is so strong.
When I heard a song my mind followed that song\'s atmospher.
It\'s like magic.
That\'s why I love music:)
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann!
Oh, I\'ve never heard of that song. I\'ll look it up. It sounds interesting.
There\'s a song that I\'m really into these days.
>> CORRECT
The song is \'When I\'m still getting over you\'.
>> The song is \"When I\'m still getting over you\".
Singer is Peter Elias.
>> The singer is Peter Elias.
I love his voice.
>> CORRECT
It\'s really soft and strong.
>> CORRECT
Sometimes make me cry and make a smile.
>> He sometimes make me smile and cry.
Music power is so strong.
>> The power of music is strong
When I heard a song my mind followed that song\'s atmospher.
>> When I hear this song, my mind follows it\'s atmosphere.
It\'s like magic.
>> CORRECT
That\'s why I love music:)
>> This is why I love music.
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