Musical
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Theme: [ESSAY] Write about one musical(opera) that you know.
I know an opera named Magic Flute and I love its aria.
In this opera, the Queen of the Night persuades Prince Tamino to rescue her daughter Pamina from captivity under the high priest Sarastro; instead, he learns the high ideals of Sarastro\'s community and seeks to join it.
It\'s very famous opera by Mozart.
Magic Flute! I love it!
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Here\'s your 3rd composition this week, Clair!
Catch you on Wednesday!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Write about one musical(opera) that you know.
I know an opera named Magic Flute and I love its aria.
>> or: I know an opera called Magic Flute and I\'m a big fan of its aria.
In this opera, the Queen of the Night persuades Prince Tamino to rescue her daughter Pamina from captivity under the high priest Sarastro; instead, he learns the high ideals of Sarastro\'s community and seeks to join it.
>> correct~~
It\'s very famous opera by Mozart.
>> It\'s a very famous opera by Mozart.
>> or: It\'s well-known opera by Mozart.
Magic Flute! I love it!
>> correct~~
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