Musicals
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Theme: [ESSAY] How much do you know about musicals?
Musical is a performance that is live.
Many actors and actresses act on the musical.
There are many famous musical like , , .
There are many famous musical writers.
But I haven\'t seen a musical!
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Theme: [ESSAY] How much do you know about musicals?
Musical is a performance that is live.
>> A musical is a performance that is live.
>> or: A musical is a live performance.
Many actors and actresses act on the musical.
>> correct~~
There are many famous musical like , , .
>> There are many famous musicals, such as The Phantom of the Opera, The Lion King, Mamma Mia, and so on.
There are many famous musical writers.
>> There are many famous playwrights.
>> or: There are many popular musicals.
But I haven\'t seen a musical!
>> But I haven\'t seen a musical yet.
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