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Hi Justin!
You did a great job in writing about your daily routine. You were able to express your
ideas really well. I noticed a few mistakes though -- check them out and make sure you don't make the same mistakes next time!
T. Marie
What wime do you get up in the morning?
>> What time do you get up in the morning?
I get up at six o'clock in the morning.
>>Correct
OR>>Usually, I get up at 6am.
And I eat breakfast at seven o'clock.
>>Correct
OR>>At seven o'clock, I eat my breakfast.
I goes to school at eaight: ten.
>> I go to school at ten minutes past eight.
I naver late for school.
>>I am never late for school.
I have a 6 class on Monday, Tuesday,Thuseday,Friday.
>> I have 6 classes every Monday, Tuesday, Thursday and Friday.
And I have a 5 class on Wednesday.
>> And I have 5 classes every Wednesday.
and i have 4 class on saturday.
>> I have 4 classes every Saturday.
I usually com home st three o'clock.
>> I usually come home at three o'clock.
I study math,senice,social senice wilth my father,and I study Korean with my mother .
>> I study math, science and social science with my father, while I study Korean with my mother.
and I do my English homework at 4 or 5 O'clock.
>> I do my English homework at around 4 or 5 o'clock.
And i eat dinner 6 o'clock.
>> I eat dinner 6 o'clock.
I take my shower at a eight:fifteen.
>>I take a shower at a quarter past eight.
I go to bed at 9 o'clock.
>>Correct
OR>>I sleep at 9 pm.
HOW ABOUT YOU?
>>Correct
OR>>What about you?
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