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2019-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

best fruit is pear. And it is different with Europeans pear. Korean pear is so sweet, juicy and crispy a little. if you travel to korea, you should try to have some pears.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!

Thank you! 
I hope I can try Korean pears too.
I\'ll definitely try that once I\'ll be given a [이름]ce to go there. ^^

Happy Weekend and see you on Monday!

~Teacher Gina


My best fruit is pear. 
>> The best fruit for me is the pear.
>> Or: My favorite fruit is pear.
And it is different with Europeans pear.
>> And it is different from European pears.
Korean pear is so sweet, juicy and crispy a little.
>> Korean pear is so sweet, juicy and a little crispy.
 If you travel to Korea, you should try to have some pears.
>> CORRECT.

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