my absence
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ms. [이름]! ^^ It\'s a rainy morning in my town now. There is a strong typhoon at the moment! :( Anyway, I hope that you\'re safe. Thanks for diligently doing your homework. See you in class! ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Suddenly I had to skip my study today
>>> Suddenly I had to skip my class today.
Because our gas boiler didn\'t work so strangers came to my home to fix
>>>It\'s because our gas boiler isn\'t working so strangers came to my home to fix.
But it doesn\'t .work yet so far
>>> But it\'s still not working yet.
I\'m worried about this winter.
>>>I\'m worried about winter.
My son took a shower with cold water after exercising.
>>> CORRECT
What a pity my son
>>> What a pitiful son.
t\'s cold in Busan now.
>>> CORRECT
Do you understand my feeling?
>>> CORRECT
>>>OR: Do you understand how I feel?
I opened my web site to do my homework but nothing.
>>> I opened my website to do my homework but there was nothing.
I knew that if I missed my class, no homework
Is it right?
>>>I knew that if I missed my class, there will be no homework.
Is it right? ( I still give homework even if you cancel your class Ms. [이름] ^^.)
Actually I want to tell you a lot but my English skill is short.
>>> Actually, I want to tell you a lot but my English skill is still not enough.
Poor myself.
>>> I\'m so poor. (It\'s okay. I know you can do it as we go further with our studies. Just keep on Ms. [이름]. Think positive. ^^ )
Now, this time is over the midnight.
>>> Now, the time is over midnight.
My teacher , have a sweet dream^^
>>> CORRECT (Thank you! I hope you had a good night too~! ^^)
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