my absence

2018-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

Suddenly I had to skip my study today Because our gas boiler didn't work so strangers came to my home to fix But it doesn't work yet so far I'm worried about this winter My son took a shower with cold water after exercising What a pity my son It's cold in Busan now Do you understand my feeling? I opened my web site to do my homework but nothing I knew that if I missed my class, no homework Is it right? Actually I want to tell you a lot but my English skill is short Poor myself Now, this time is over the midnight My teacher , have a sweet dream^^

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [이름]! ^^ It\'s a rainy morning in my town now. There is a strong typhoon at the moment! :( Anyway, I hope that you\'re safe. Thanks for diligently doing your homework. See you in class! ^^

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

Suddenly I had to skip my study today

>>> Suddenly I had to skip my class today.
Because our gas boiler didn\'t work so strangers came to my home to fix

>>>It\'s because our gas boiler isn\'t working so strangers came to my home to fix.
But it doesn\'t .work yet so far

>>> But it\'s still not working yet. 
I\'m worried about this winter.

>>>I\'m worried about winter.
My son took a shower with cold water after exercising.

>>> CORRECT
What a pity my son

>>> What a pitiful son.
 t\'s cold in Busan now.

>>> CORRECT
Do you understand my feeling?
>>> CORRECT

>>>OR: Do you understand how I feel?
I opened my web site to do my homework but nothing.

>>> I opened my website to do my homework but there was nothing.
I knew that if I missed my class, no homework
Is it right?

>>>I knew that if I missed my class, there will be no homework.
Is it right?
( I still give homework even if you cancel your class Ms. [이름] ^^.)
Actually I want to tell you a lot but my English skill is short.

>>> Actually, I want to tell you a lot but my English skill is still not enough.

Poor myself.

>>> I\'m so poor. (It\'s okay. I know you can do it as we go further with our studies. Just keep on Ms. [이름]. Think positive. ^^ )
Now, this time is over the midnight.

>>> Now, the time is over midnight.
My teacher , have a sweet dream^^

>>> CORRECT (Thank you! I hope you had a good night too~! ^^)

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