My Academy vacation.

2014-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Today is my academy vacation. Today is very good. I will meet my friend. My mother will go my academy. My sister go to my academy. But tomorrow is new year. Tomorrow is very good for me. Good bye see you next time~~~~~~~~~~>ぎがつじたさがかぁÆÆÆÐÐĦĦĦŒŒŒœßßøðđ ぎがつじたさがかぁÆÆÆÐÐĦĦĦŒŒŒœßßøðđ ぎがつじたさがかぁÆÆÆÐÐĦĦĦŒŒŒœßßøðđ ぎがつじたさがかぁÆÆÆÐÐĦĦĦŒŒŒœßßøðđ ぎがつじたさがかぁÆÆÆÐÐĦĦĦŒŒŒœßßøðđ

강사 첨삭

Happy New Year!^.^

Thank you so much for sending me a message!^.^

Anyhow, you might ask me why I changed the sentence with the word \"today\".

We don\'t usually start our sentence with this word.

If you are going to emphasize the day, then it has to be:

Today, I feel very good.

If you have further questions, feel free to ask in class.

See you!
~~Teacher Chloe~~

Today is my academy vacation.

>>It is my academy vacation today.
 Today is very good.

>>This day is very good.
 I will meet my friend.

>>Correct.
 My mother will go my academy.

>>My mother will go to my academy.
 My sister go to my academy.

>>My sister will also go to my academy.
 But tomorrow is new year.

>>Correct^^

 Tomorrow is very good for me.

>>Tomorrow is a good time for me.

 Good bye see you next time

>>Good bye. See you next time.^^

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