My Academy vacation.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy New Year!^.^
Thank you so much for sending me a message!^.^
Anyhow, you might ask me why I changed the sentence with the word \"today\".
We don\'t usually start our sentence with this word.
If you are going to emphasize the day, then it has to be:
Today, I feel very good.
If you have further questions, feel free to ask in class.
See you!
~~Teacher Chloe~~
Today is my academy vacation.
>>It is my academy vacation today.
Today is very good.
>>This day is very good.
I will meet my friend.
>>Correct.
My mother will go my academy.
>>My mother will go to my academy.
My sister go to my academy.
>>My sister will also go to my academy.
But tomorrow is new year.
>>Correct^^
Tomorrow is very good for me.
>>Tomorrow is a good time for me.
Good bye see you next time
>>Good bye. See you next time.^^
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