My accommodation when traveling
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer to staying in hotel or motel when traveling.
I prefer to taking a rest after one day\'s schedules, and I can take a rest in my own room in hotels or motels.
Sometimes I can reserve clean and cheap rooms. At that time, I\'m satisfied that I save my budget.
But I don\'t recommend staying in too much cheap hotel.
Last summer, I stayed at motel where fee is almost 60,000 won. I wasn\'t satisfied staying there.
The room was too small and air conditioner was too old.
And I was shocked that the owner kept my luggage at shabby storage.
I was afraid if someone stole my luggage, so I took a picture of my luggage.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing your preferred accommodation, [이름]. ^^ It was good that you took a picture of your luggage for safety reasons.
-Khai
I prefer to staying in hotel or motel when traveling.
>> I prefer staying in a hotel or motel when traveling.
I prefer to taking a rest after one day\'s schedules, and I can take a rest in my own room in hotels or motels.
I prefer to taking a rest after one day\'s schedules, and I can take a rest in my own room in hotels or motels.
>> I prefer taking a rest after one day\'s schedule, and I can take a rest in my own room in hotels or motels.
Sometimes I can reserve clean and cheap rooms.
Sometimes I can reserve clean and cheap rooms.
>> CORRECT
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>> Sometimes I book clean and cheap rooms.
At that time, I\'m satisfied that I save my budget.
>> At that time, I\'m satisfied that I saved my budget.
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>> With that, I\'m satisfied that I saved money.
But I don\'t recommend staying in too much cheap hotel.>> But I don\'t recommend staying in a very cheap hotel.
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>> However, I don\'t recommend staying in a very cheap hotel.
Last summer, I stayed at motel where fee is almost 60,000 won.>> Last summer, I stayed at a motel where the fee was almost 60,000 won.
I wasn\'t satisfied staying there.
>> I wasn\'t satisfied with my stay.
The room was too small and air conditioner was too old.>> The room was too small, and the air conditioner was too old.
And I was shocked that the owner kept my luggage at shabby storage.>> And I was shocked that the owner kept my luggage in a shabby storage.
I was afraid if someone stole my luggage, so I took a picture of my luggage.
I was afraid if someone stole my luggage, so I took a picture of my luggage.
>> I was afraid that someone might steal my luggage, so I took a picture of my luggage.
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