My accommodation when traveling

2024-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Khai

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I prefer to staying in hotel or motel when traveling. I prefer to taking a rest after one day\'s schedules, and I can take a rest in my own room in hotels or motels. Sometimes I can reserve clean and cheap rooms. At that time, I\'m satisfied that I save my budget. But I don\'t recommend staying in too much cheap hotel. Last summer, I stayed at motel where fee is almost 60,000 won. I wasn\'t satisfied staying there. The room was too small and air conditioner was too old. And I was shocked that the owner kept my luggage at shabby storage. I was afraid if someone stole my luggage, so I took a picture of my luggage.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for sharing your preferred accommodation, [이름]. ^^ It was good that you took a picture of your luggage for safety reasons. 
-Khai
I prefer to staying in hotel or motel when traveling.
>> I prefer staying in a hotel or motel when traveling.
I prefer to taking a rest after one day\'s schedules, and I can take a rest in my own room in hotels or motels.
>> I prefer taking a rest after one day\'s schedule, and I can take a rest in my own room in hotels or motels.
Sometimes I can reserve clean and cheap rooms. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Sometimes I book clean and cheap rooms.

At that time, I\'m satisfied that I save my budget.

>> At that time, I\'m satisfied that I saved my budget.

OR

>> With that, I\'m satisfied that I saved money.

But I don\'t recommend staying in too much cheap hotel.

>> But I don\'t recommend staying in a very cheap hotel.

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>> However, I don\'t recommend staying in a very cheap hotel.

Last summer, I stayed at motel where fee is almost 60,000 won. 
>> Last summer, I stayed at a motel where the fee was almost 60,000 won.
I wasn\'t satisfied staying there.

>> I wasn\'t satisfied with my stay.

The room was too small and air conditioner was too old.

>> The room was too small, and the air conditioner was too old.

And I was shocked that the owner kept my luggage at shabby storage.
>> And I was shocked that the owner kept my luggage in a shabby storage.
I was afraid if someone stole my luggage, so I took a picture of my luggage.
>> I was afraid that someone might steal my luggage, so I took a picture of my luggage.

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