My accomplishment as a student
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I feel accomplished every time that I finished all the final exams. Finishing final exams means the end of a semester and I don’t have to burn my self anymore. But the real accomplishment is to get higher grade than previous semester. When I get great grades and can receive scholarships. I think the best thing that students can do is to concentrate on own study. So my grade is objective proof of my accomplishment as a student.
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Hi. Thanks for sharing. :)
-T. Gabby
I feel accomplished every time that I finished all the final exams.
>> I feel accomplished every time I finished all the final exams.
Finishing final exams means the end of a semester and I don’t have to burn my self anymore.
>> Finishing final exams means it\'s the end of the semester and I don’t have to burn my self anymore.
But the real accomplishment is to get higher grade than previous semester.
>> Correct.
When I get great grades and can receive scholarships.
>> Correct.
I think the best thing that students can do is to concentrate on own study.
>> I think that the best thing students must do is to concentrate on their studies.
So my grade is objective proof of my accomplishment as a student.
>> Correct.
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