my advantage
학생이 쓴 원문
I will explain my advantages
First, I\'m good at the math
Second I\'m like science
Third, I\'m very kind.
They are my advantages
END
강사 첨삭
I will explain my advantages
First, I\'m good at the math
Second I\'m like science
Third, I\'m very kind.
They are my advantages
END
>> I will write about my assets.
First, I\'m good at the math
>> First, I\'m good at math.
Second I\'m like science
>> Second, I like science.
Third, I\'m very kind.
>> This is a good sentence.
They are my advantages
>> These are my assets.
END
>> You no longer need to put this.
Hi, [이름]! Thank you for always doing your homework. Superb! Just remember to put a period (.) at the end of your declarative and imperative sentences.
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