My advice to him/her
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It is natural to be resistant to change or be difficult to adapt due to the characteristic of human.
>>It is natural for humans to be resistant to change or find it difficult to adapt.
Thus, If I see someone who is facing this kind of difficulty, It is really important to sympathize with his/her situation and mind.
>>Therefore, if I encounter someone facing this kind of difficulty, it is important to empathize with their situation and mindset.
And then, I can explain some benefits of similar cases when he/she will adapt to change.
>>And then, I can explain the benefits observed in similar cases where individuals successfully adapted to change.
Maybe, It is the best to give not only advices, but also cheers that I always express support during his/her change process.
>>Ultimately, it is beneficial to provide not only advice but also encouragement, expressing constant support throughout their change process.
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