my all time favorite movie.
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my all time favorite movie is FROZEN. i think my first movie is FROZEN. i watched this movie with my cousin. the reason why FROZEN is my favorite.is my first and at that time i was really shocked by thier beautiful appearance. also l always sang LET IT GO. at that time, FROZEN was revolution. still now, i watched so many brilliant movies but anything can beat the the feeling of first meeting of FROZEN.
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Hello, Stella!
T[이름]k you so much for doing your assignment! ^^
T[이름]k you so much for doing your assignment! ^^
Anyways, see you tomorrow!
-T.Jhozel
my all time favorite movie is FROZEN. i think my first movie is FROZEN.
>> Frozen is my all-time favorite movie. I think it was the first movie I saw.
i watched this movie with my cousin.
>> I watched this movie with my cousin.
OR: I saw this film with my cousin.
the reason why FROZEN is my favorite.is my first and at that time i was really shocked by thier beautiful appearance.
>> Frozen is my favorite because it was my first and I was blown away by how gorgeous they were.
also l always sang LET IT GO. at that time, FROZEN was revolution.
>> Also, I was always singing LET IT GO. FROZEN was a revolution at the time.
still now, i watched so many brilliant movies but anything can beat the the feeling of first meeting of FROZEN.
>> I\'ve seen a lot of great movies since then, but nothing beats the thrill of first meeting Frozen.
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