My allowance

Hi, [이름]!^^
Long time no talk!^^
How are you doing my dear? I think your allowance

is enough for you to live. Students nowadays need to know

how to spend money so that in the future, they wouldn\'t have a hard

time adjusting when it comes to money.

You are doing a great job, [이름]!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

I get 10000won a month for allowance.

>> Correct

Some firends say that 10000won is not enough to live for a month.

>> Some friends say that it is not enough to live for a month.

But I think it\'s enough.

>> Correct

I usually use my allownace for buying snacks

>> I usually use my allowance for buying snacks.

My academy is finished at 10:00p.

>> My classes in the academy finish at 10:00P.M.

When academy is finished I became hungry.

>> When I finish, I become hungry.

That\'s why I eat snacks.

>> Correct

However,I like to eat snakcs, I have to save money.

>>  However, even though I like to eat snacks, I have to save money.

So I save the money that I get from my cousins at holiday.

>> So I save the money that I get from my cousins during the holiday.

I want to use my allowance well.

>> Correct

So I decided to keep a money diary.

>> Correct

If I write money diary I\'ll became a good spender

>> If I write the money I spend in my diary, I\'ll become a good spender.