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2022-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Erin

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my answer 1 Do you take medicine when you are sick? - Of course. i think medicine is so fit me. even it taste too. i love medicine taste. for example, vitamin ! 2. How often do you exercise? - alomost never. ~_~ i\'m not good at sports, and when i was middle school student, i always get sleep hide teacher when gym class..haha

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jumi!
Thank you for sending me your composition. I\'m glad that you like the taste of medicine. But, I hope you will keep yourself healthy so that you will not drink some medicines all the time. Having a proper diet and good exercise will help us to be more physically fit. ^-^

~T.Erin

Of course. i think medicine is so fit me.
>>Of course. I think medicine is good for me.
 even it taste too. 
>>I even like its taste.
i love medicine taste. 
>>I love the taste of medicine.
for example, vitamin !
>>For example, some vitamins.

alomost never. ~_~ 
>>I never do exercises.
i\'m not good at sports, and when i was middle school student, 
>>I\'m not good at sports, and when I was in middle school,
i always get sleep hide teacher when gym class..haha
>>I always hide from my teacher to take a sleep in our gym class. 

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