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2015-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Q. Explain how you'll entertain guests who unexpectedly arrive at your home. A. Sometimes, someone is arrived unexpectedly. and then I am embarrassed. But I often try to entertain something with someone. It is board-game. Because, there are two reasons. First reason is to enjoy playing board-game, and second reason Board game rule is very simple. so It's playing everyone.

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Good morning! Thanks for sharing this. I think I should visit you unexpectedly in the future. Hahaha(joke!) Please go over the sentences. See you on Monday! ~T. Jessie~ Q. Explain how you\'ll entertain guests who unexpectedly arrive at your home.A. Sometimes, someone is arrived unexpectedly. >> Sometimes, someone arrives unexpectedly. and then I am embarrassed. >> At that time, I am embarrassed. But I often try to entertain something with someone. >> But I often try to entertain someone by doing something. It is board-game. >> It is a board-game. OR>> It is by playing board games. Because, there are two reasons. >> There are two reasons. OR>> Because of two reasons. First reason is to enjoy playing board-game, and second reason Board game rule is very simple. >> The first reason is to enjoy playing board games, and the second reason is  the rules are very simple. so It\'s playing everyone. >> So everyone can play it.

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