My application for WFK(PLAN)

2019-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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I believe that a conservative and sound economic model will help your country to get out of the global economic crisis we face now, it will help the country\'s economy to rise strongly. Government should manage debt more carefully like this; taking longer debt maturity and reducing dependence on short-term debt. As a means of doing so, I wish to do as follows 1.Analysis of national debt risk. 2.Suggestion to activate the government bond market. 3.Specialization of national debt management system 4.Proposal to establishment of Debt Management Office

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
I\'m really looking forward to meeting you tomorrow! Thank you for sending these composition to give me an idea about your background. I would like to know more when we start having classes. ^^
~~Teacher Kate

1) I believe that a conservative and sound economic model will help your country to get out of the global economic crisis we face now, it will help the country\'s economy to rise strongly.
>>CORRECT!
2) Government should manage debt more carefully like this; taking longer debt maturity and reducing dependence on short-term debt.
>> The government should manage debt more carefully like this; taking longer debt maturity and reducing dependence on short-term debt.
3) As a means of doing so, I wish to do as follows:
1.Analysis of national debt risk.
2.Suggestion to activate the government bond market.
3.Specialization of national debt management system
4.Proposal to establishment of Debt Management Office
>>CORRECT!

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