My aspiration
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm thinking about my dream..so I'm now trying to get aspiration
about something. Thank you ^^
I have a passion so I will get aspiration soon...................
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Thank you for sending this composition! You did a good job in writing this. I hope you뭠l know what you really want in life. By the way, I noticed some mistakes in your composition. Have a nice evening!
T. May
I'm thinking about my dream..
>> I'm thinking about my dream.
so I'm now trying to get aspiration about something. >>So I'm now trying to realize my aspiration about something.
Thank you ^^>>CorrectI have a passion so I will get aspiration soon...................
>> I have passion so I will realize my aspiration soon.
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