My assignment
학생이 쓴 원문
My car is available at your free time.
I\'ll stay on the line until he finishes talking with the customer.
As soon as I take the call from my girlfriend in the office, my boss yelled at me.
When I was young, I often dialed the wrong number.
Our director informs me that I have to take a class in China over the phone.
I\'m nervous because I am expecting a call.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your edited homework, Sean!
Many thanks for sending it. Speak soon!
Cheers,
Jean~~
My car is available at your free time.
>> My car is available at your convenience.
I\'ll stay on the line until he finishes talking with the customer.
>> or: I\'ll hold the line until he finishes talking with the customer.
As soon as I take the call from my girlfriend in the office, my boss yelled at me.
>> As soon as I took the call from my girlfriend in the office, my boss yelled at me.
When I was young, I often dialed the wrong number.
>>correct~~
Our director informs me that I have to take a class in China over the phone.
>> or: Our director informs me that I have to take a class over the phone and the teacher is based in China.
I\'m nervous because I am expecting a call.
>>correct~~
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