My assignment
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According to the personnel manager in Korea\'s Large Enterprises, the most useless qualification among the job applicants is educational background.
I totally agree with that.
I believe the ability of the study and that of the work is different.
The teaching to a person has the limitation.
The school doesn\'t teach everything.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Sean!
Here\'s your edited composition.
Have a safe and happy Lunar New Year!
Cheers,
Jean~~
According to the personnel manager in Korea\'s Large Enterprises, the most useless qualification among the job applicants is educational background.
>> According to the personnel managers in Korea\'s large enterprises, the most useless qualification among the job applicants is the educational background.
I totally agree with that.
>> or: I am in total agreement with this.
I believe the ability of the study and that of the work is different.
>> I believe that the ability of a person to study is different from that of the work.
The teaching to a person has the limitation.
>> Teaching a person has its limitations.
The school doesn\'t teach everything.
>> or: There are many things, such as life skills that aren\'t taught in school.
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