My attitude.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to change my attitude toward life.
I want to get resolute attitude in any situation.
I want to become a person with healthy body and mind. And person who is not attached to human relationships.
Also I want open mind to learning.
강사 첨삭
May you grow as an individual as time goes by, Jenny. See you tomorrow!-Faith-
I want to change my attitude toward life.>> CORRECT
I want to get resolute attitude in any situation.
I want to get resolute attitude in any situation.
>> CORRECT
OR I aspire to be a tenacious person.
I want to become a person with healthy body and mind. And person who is not attached to human relationships.
I want to become a person with healthy body and mind. And person who is not attached to human relationships.
>> I want to become a person with healthy body and mind, and a person who is not attached to human relationships.
Also I want open mind to learning.
Also I want open mind to learning.
>> Also, I want to be open-minded in learning.
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