My attitude to my life
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I really wanted to study more so that's why I quit my job. Nowadays, I'm preparing for an exam and I was about to think it is hard to just focus on studying. So, I started to think it would be good enough to be accepted by any school without reminding me of my goal. Yesterday, I realized why I wanted to study and that I'm having a great opportunity to make my hope true. I made up my mind in order to do my best on my job. I should make a lot of effort as much as I can since this job is the one I always hope to do it. Don't forget my mistake which I made during my college. When I take it less serious and don't think thoroughly, I will definetely be regreting what I've done.
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Hi [이름] J
You know sometimes in our life we have to make really hard decisions. But whatever decisions you make, good luck and I know and believe that you will make the right decision.
NicoleJ
I really wanted to study more so that's why I quit my job.
>> I really wanted to study more that's why I quitted my job.
Nowadays, I'm preparing for an exam and I was about to think it is hard to just focus on studying.
>>Especially nowadays that I’m preparing for an exam and I have been thinking that it might be difficult so I just want to focus in studying.
So, I started to think it would be good enough to be accepted by any school without reminding me of my goal.
>> So, I started to think it would be better to be accepted by any school without considering my goal.
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>>So, I started to think that it would be best to enter in any of the universities without considering my goal.
Yesterday, I realized why I wanted to study and that I'm having a great opportunity to make my hope true.
>> It was yesterday when I finally realized that I want to study to have a dream come true.
I made up my mind in order to do my best on my job.
>>And now, I made up my mind, I want to excel in my future job.
I should make a lot of effort as much as I can since this job is the one I always hope to do it.
>>So, I have to exert a lot of effort since this I the only way to achieve my dream job.
Don't forget my mistake which I made during my college.
>>I will never forget the mistakes I had during my college life.
When I take it less serious and don't think thoroughly, I will definetely be regreting what I've done.
>>If I won’t take this matter seriously and thoroughly, I might regret what I have done.
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