My aunt
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Jay,
I didn\'t think about my health when I was much younger too. Now that I\'m older, I fully understood the importance of good health.
~Lynn
I have an aunt and she has been giving me much love since I was born.
>> correct!
When I was younger, my aunt was also younger and she was healthier than now, so I have never worried about her health.
>> correct!
However, her habits which has been lasting for long time make her health bad now.
>> However, her habits which she has been doing for a long time made her health bad now.
Several years ago, she got an opperation on her spine. It took much time for her to get better.
>> correct!
After this surgery,there have been many opperations over years.
>> After this surgery,there had been many opperations over the years.
I want her to consider her health and try to work out or exercise in the gym, not hanging out much time in the house.
>> I want her to consider her health and try to work out or exercise in the gym not staying most of the time at home.
I hope the getting better in her health this year the most.
>> I hope she\'ll be healthier this year.
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