My bad behaviors
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My bad behaviors is bite nail side skin by my self.
Sometime when I get the more stress and then more painful
I already know by my self it\'s so dangerous habit.
But I does Unconsciously.
So I went nail care shop and take care my nails skin.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
I think that is your mannerism. You do it unconsciously. Try diverting your focus when you feel like doing it. :)
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My bad behaviors is bite nail side skin by my self.
>> My bad behavior is biting the side skin of my nails.
Sometime when I get the more stress and then more painful.
>> Sometimes I do it when I feel stressed and in pain.
I already know by my self it\'s so dangerous habit.
>> I already know that it is a dangerous habit.
But I does Unconsciously.
>> BUt I do it unconsciously.
So I went nail care shop and take care my nails skin.
>> So I usually go to the nail salon and have my nails taken care of.
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