my bad experience.

sorry, too late ㅜㅜ you know, i have been to Australia. it has bad thing or good thing. frankly, i had a lot of good experience. but i had a little bad experience too. it happended in my homestay. i lived with my friend, and 2 sisters. 2 sisters are very strange girls. one is that friend and i felt heavy. she didn't know how to cooking and cleaning. and also everyday she always did following act. another want to be a boss among our. she didn't any housework and accused to our. they said just you do it. beacause we are youger than them. after that, they left homestay after 3 months. we was feeling happy.

Hello Tracy, Good morning to you...Thank you for passing a composition.You have a sweet voice...Anyways regarding your composition I made some revisions to your sentences. Kindly check on them!!! Have a great day ahead and I'll talk to you again tomorrow.Love,Verna  you know, i have been to Australia.>> I told you that I have been to Australia.it has bad thing or good thing.>> I had bad and good things there.frankly, i had a lot of good experience.>> Frankly, I had a lot of good experiences.but i had a little bad experience too.>> Correctit happended in my homestay.>> It happened in my homestay.i lived with my friend, and 2 sisters.>> Correct2 sisters are very strange girls.>> The two sisters are very strange.one is that friend and i felt heavy. >> I felt sad because of my friend.she didn't know how to cooking and cleaning. and also everyday she always did following act.>>She didn't know how to cook and clean. another want to be a boss among our.>> The other wants to be the boss among us.she didn't any housework and accused to our.>>She didn't do any housework and accused us of not doing it.they said just you do it. beacause we are youger than them.>> They said we have to do it because we were younger.after that, they left home stay after 3 months.>>After three months they left our home stay.we was feeling happy. >> We were very happy.