My bad experience in Cebu.
학생이 쓴 원문
I set a plan to go abroad more than ten times a year.
So far, i visited two cities which are Cebu and Bangkok.
During staying in Cebu, i could spend enjoyable time.
People in Cebu are really optimistic, kind and polite.
But, i got not that good impression of Cebu in some aspect.
Speaking my experience, some Cebu kids bagging in the street bothered me a lot.
When i was walking alongside the street, several kids dashed to me and tried to rob my
wallet. I could not defense myself beacuse they are so furious for stealing.
At the time i arrived at my hotel, i found my wallet disappeared.
I felt so bad and my journey was ruined.
강사 첨삭
Oh I\'m terribly sorry about what happened to you while staying in Cebu. Usually the kids doesn\'t really want to steal or beg for money. The sad thing is, there are bad people out there (we call them syndicates) who exploit these kids and force them to beg and steal, and they physically hurt them if they don\'t bring back home any money. Cebu nonetheless is a beautiful place. I just hope that you have more happy memories in Cebu. Thanks for sharing me your experience.
I set a plan to go abroad more than ten times a year.
>>I usually set a plan to go abroad more than ten times a year.So far, i visited two cities which are Cebu and Bangkok.>>So far, I visited two cities, Cebu and Bangkok.
During staying in Cebu, i could spend enjoyable time.>>While stayin in Cebu, I had a very enjoyable time.
People in Cebu are really optimistic, kind and polite.>>Correct!
But, i got not that good impression of Cebu in some aspect. >>But I also got a bad impression of Cebu in some aspect.
Speaking my experience, some Cebu kids bagging in the street bothered me a lot.>>Speaking from experience, some Cebu kids begging in the streets bothered me a lot.
When i was walking alongside the street, several kids dashed to me and tried to rob my wallet.>>While I was walking along the street, several kids dashed to me and tried to rob my wallet.
I could not defense myself beacuse they are so furious for stealing.>>I could not defend myself because they are so intent on stealing.
At the time i arrived at my hotel, i found my wallet disappeared.>>At that time, I arrived in my hotel and found my that my wallet is gone.
I felt so bad and my journey was ruined.
>>Correct!
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