My Bad Memory
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A memory which I want to forget is when I fought with my friend largely. I want to forget this memory because I do not want to remember it and this memory sometimes make me sad.
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There are things that we would like to change in our past. Sometimes we feel regret but often times, it helps us grow into a better person. There is a saying that experiences are the best teachers so we should be thankful for the things in the past.
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>>A memory which I want to forget is when I fought with my friend intensely.
I want to forget this memory because I do not want to remember it and this memory sometimes make me sad.
>>I want to forget this memory because it sometimes makes me sad.
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