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Q1: Tell me about a time when you had to handle multiple responsibilities.
Okay, First of all I would like to search the most important thing and I'll deal with problem. After deal with that and I manage another things one by one.
The most important thing is when I had to handle multiple and I should not embarrassed by some matter.
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Q1: Tell me about a time when you had to handle multiple responsibilities.
>> Correct.Okay, First of all I would like to search the most important thing and I'll deal with problem.
>> Okay, first of all, I would like to search for the most important thing then I'll deal with the problem.
After deal with that and I manage another things one by one.
>> After dealing with that, I can manage other things one by one.The most important thing is when I had to handle multiple and I should not embarrassed by some matter.
>> The most important thing is when I have to handle multiple responsibilities, I should not be embarrassed with some matters.
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