My best birthday{02/17}
학생이 쓴 원문
My best birthday present was happy birthday party.
Because my parents cooked lots of delicious foods.
There were sandwith, cutlet, Tteokbokki.......
I really like that party!!!!!!!!!!
I like birthday party, but this party was the best!!^-^
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My best birthday present was happy birthday party. Because my parents cooked lots of delicious foods.
>> My best birthday present for my dad was a party because at that time, my parents cooked lots of delicious foods.
There were sandwith, cutlet, Tteokbokki.......
>> There were sandwich, cutlet, tteokbokki, and so on.
I really like that party!!!!!!!!!!
>> correct
I like birthday party, but this party was the best!!^-^
>> I like birthday parties, but this party was the best!!
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