My best experience

2022-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I have so many times best experience in my life. But most best experience is travel with my friend. When I was 22 I went kotakinabalu in malaysia. At that time I made first new foreigner friends. That was amazing time in my life :)

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I have so many times best experience in my life.

>> I have so many times best experience in my life.

But most best experience is travel with my friend.

>> But the best experience that I have is when I traveled with my friend.

When I was 22 I went kotakinabalu in malaysia.

>> That was when I was 22 years old. We went to Kotakinabalu, Malaysia.

At that time I made first new foreigner friends.

>> At that time, I made new foreigner friends.

That was amazing time in my life :)

>> That was an amazing time in my life :)

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