My best friend
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Gabby!
I was thought her who spent girls\' high school together my best friend.
I am confused it this days.
I can\'t meet her, I don\'t miss her and I don\'t call the phone with her often.
She works two the jobs. I\'m hard to talk on the phone with her because she always busy.
Many people were changed as spent time and one\'s own situation.
I think the best friend in made between people in similar situation.
There is a sayng \"Out of sight, out of [이름]d\".
I think so. Friend often have to meet talking.
But I was move to away far from her. I am much thinking that I make as the best friend of what.
This days, I spend many time studying in English. Is my best friend studying English
I will go out to meet my friends soon.
They are good neighbor.
Bye Gabby.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Great work. :)
- T. Gabby :)
Hi Gabby!
>> Correct.
I was thought her who spent girls\' high school together my best friend.
I was thought her who spent girls\' high school together my best friend.
>> I remembered when we spent time together during high school.
I am confused it this days.
I am confused it this days.
>> I am confused these days.
I can\'t meet her, I don\'t miss her and I don\'t call the phone with her often.
I can\'t meet her, I don\'t miss her and I don\'t call the phone with her often.
>> I can\'t meet her, but I don\'t miss her and I don\'t call her on the phone too.
She works two the jobs.
She works two the jobs.
>> She works on two jobs.
I\'m hard to talk on the phone with her because she always busy.
>> She\'s always busy so I can\'t talk to her over the phone.
Many people were changed as spent time and one\'s own situation.
>> Many people changed and spend more with other things.
I think the best friend in made between people in similar situation.
I think the best friend in made between people in similar situation.
>> I think that best friends won\'t have similar situations.
There is a sayng \"Out of sight, out of [이름]d\".
There is a sayng \"Out of sight, out of [이름]d\".
>> There\'s this saying \"Out of sight, out of [이름]d\".
I think so. Friend often have to meet talking.
I think so. Friend often have to meet talking.
>> I think so. Friend often have to meet to talk.
But I was move to away far from her.
But I was move to away far from her.
>> But I moved far from her.
I am much thinking that I make as the best friend of what.
>> I think more of other things now.
This days, I spend many time studying in English. Is my best friend studying English
This days, I spend many time studying in English. Is my best friend studying English
>> I spend most of my time studying English and it\'s my best friend now.
I will go out to meet my friends soon.
I will go out to meet my friends soon.
>> Correct.
They are good neighbor.
They are good neighbor.
>> They are good neighbors.
Bye Gabby.
Bye Gabby.
>> Correct.
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