My best friend
학생이 쓴 원문
My best friend in school is Seyoung. We have many things in common. We are in same school year and we took many same classes. She is a year older than me, but we hang out most of our spare time. Also we are in same school year and we took many same classes.
We spend our time not only at the school but also in my house or around the school. Our eating preferences are very similar so I love to have a lunch with her.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. You have an awesome best friend!
-T. Gabby :)
My best friend in school is Seyoung.
>> Correct.
We have many things in common.
>> Correct.
We are in same school year and we took many same classes.
>> We are in the same school year and we took many same classes.
She is a year older than me, but we hang out most of our spare time.
>> Correct.
Also we are in same school year and we took many same classes.
>> Also we are in the same school year and we took many same classes.
We spend our time not only at the school but also in my house or around the school.
We spend our time not only at the school but also in my house or around the school.
>> We spend our time not only in school but also in my house or around the school.
Our eating preferences are very similar so I love to have a lunch with her.
>> Our eating preferences are very similar so I love having lunch with her.
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