My best friend
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I have many close friend but if I have to pick one, it would be ji-hye. We met when we were 20 years old. We were the fan of the same group, and have same age. We were living in same city, so we met lot of time. We have lots of thing in common, like hobby and vision, etc. I think that\'s why we are closest friend even though we are not same collegue or same school. We meet when we have special event like birthday, or the end of a year. We talk about whole one year, and it is the event that I never doned before when I met her.
Nowday, because of corvid virus It\'s hard to meet each other, but we still meet time to time, if the situation get\'s better. We are both busy but we are trying to keep in touch for each other. I hope to be friends with her for a long time.
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Hello Annie!^^
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I have many close friend but if I have to pick one, it would be ji-hye.
>>> I have many close friends but if I have to pick one, it would be Ji-Hye.
We met when we were 20 years old.
>>> I have many close friends but if I have to pick one, it would be Ji-Hye.
We met when we were 20 years old.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>I met her when I was 20 years old.
OR>>I met her when I was 20 years old.
We were the fan of the same group, and have same age.
>>>We were a fan of the same K-pop group.
>>>We were a fan of the same K-pop group.
We were living in same city, so we met lot of time.
>>> We are living in same city, so we meet all the time.
>>> We are living in same city, so we meet all the time.
We meet when we have special event like birthday, or the end of a year.
>>>We meet when there are special events like birthdays or year-end parties.
We have lots of thing in common, like hobby and vision, etc.
>>> We have lots of things in common like the same hobbies and visions just to name a few.
I think that\'s why we are closest friend even though we are not same collegue or same school.
>>>I think that\'s why we are close even though we didn\'t go to the same school.
>>>I think that\'s why we are close even though we didn\'t go to the same school.
We talk about whole one year, and it is the event that I never doned before when I met her.
>>> We always talk about what happened in a year, and I have never done this before until I met her.
Nowday, because of corvid virus It\'s hard to meet each other, but we still meet time to time, if the situation get\'s better.
>>> Nowadays, it\'s hard for us to meet because of the COVID-19/ corona virus. We still meet from time to time if the situation gets better.
Nowday, because of corvid virus It\'s hard to meet each other, but we still meet time to time, if the situation get\'s better.
>>> Nowadays, it\'s hard for us to meet because of the COVID-19/ corona virus. We still meet from time to time if the situation gets better.
We are both busy but we are trying to keep in touch for each other. I hope to be friends with her for a long time.
>>> We are both busy but we are trying to keep in touch. I hope to be friends with her for a long time.
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