My best friend.
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, I played with my best friend Jong woo.
We have been best friends since we were in 4th grade.
I really like Jong woo because he was good at math and science.
Once, when I came over to his house, he showed me the Robot materials.
It looked really cool!!
I think when he grows up, he will know everything about any kind of Robots.
강사 첨삭
Your friend sounds cool. Here are your corrections.
Today, I played with my best friend Jong woo.>>>Correct
We have been best friends since we were in 4th grade.>>>Correct
I really like Jong woo because he was good at math and science.>>>Correct
Once, when I came over to his house, he showed me the Robot materials.>>>Once, when I came over to his house, he showed me his Robot materials.
It looked really cool!!>>>Correct
I think when he grows up, he will know everything about any kind of Robots.
>>>I think when he grows up, he will know everything about any kind of Robot.
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