My best friend

2017-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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My best friend is Sang-Yun No. I met him since the baby was born. I spent my childhood togeter. I like swimming and talking about games with him.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework again today. Enjoy more wonderful moments with your best friend!^^

Have a good day~

~T. Kelly^^

My best friend is Sang-Yun No.

>> Correct.
I met him since the baby was born.

>> I met him when he was born.
I spent my childhood togeter.

>> We spent our childhood together.
I like swimming and talking about games with him.

>> Correct.

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