My best friend
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon Gabby!
I glad to learn English from you.
Today is a wind and a sunny here.
Um... My best friend... The friend is a girls\' high school together.
She lives in long distance and she has two jobs. She always lives busy in life but I look she enjoy her life.
she has a husband, 2 daughter and 1 son.
Presently, she lives in Seoul with 4 person her family.
Because first daughter gots married two years ago.
Her skin color is healthy black and she has good [이름]d.
We went to trip another city once every year. I met her one year ago already.
Ourselve seldom have meeting and trip because it\'s corona virus.
She is very busy because she has two jobs.
She cooks very well. Before a few ten years we ate chopped noodles she\' cuisine.
Wow, The taste was fantastic. Usually we tell it\'s \"mother\'s handtaste\"
Thank you Gabby!
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. You have a great best friend! Thanks for sharing this. See you.
- T. Gabby :)
Good afternoon Gabby!>> Correct.
I glad to learn English from you.
I glad to learn English from you.
>> I am glad to learn English from you.
Today is a wind and a sunny here.
Today is a wind and a sunny here.
>> Today is windy and sunny here in our place.
Um... My best friend... The friend is a girls\' high school together.
Um... My best friend... The friend is a girls\' high school together.
>> My bestfriend and I were classmates in high school.
She lives in long distance and she has two jobs.
She lives in long distance and she has two jobs.
>> She lives far from me and she has two jobs.
She always lives busy in life but I look she enjoy her life.
>> She\'s always busy but she enjoys her life.
She has a husband, 2 daughter and 1 son.
She has a husband, 2 daughter and 1 son.
>> She has a husband, 2 daughters and 1 son.
Presently, she lives in Seoul with 4 person her family.
Presently, she lives in Seoul with 4 person her family.
>> Presently, she lives in Seoul with her family.
Because first daughter gots married two years ago.
Because first daughter gots married two years ago.
>> Her other daughter got married 2 years ago.
Her skin color is healthy black and she has good [이름]d.
Her skin color is healthy black and she has good [이름]d.
>> Her skin color is black and she\'s smart.
We went to trip another city once every year.
We went to trip another city once every year.
>> We usually go to another city every year.
I met her one year ago already.
>> It\'s been a year since I saw her.
Ourselve seldom have meeting and trip because it\'s corona virus.
>> We seldom meet because of the corona virus.
She is very busy because she has two jobs.
She is very busy because she has two jobs.
>> She is very busy because she has two jobs.
She cooks very well.
She cooks very well.
>> She cooks really well.
Before a few ten years we ate chopped noodles she\' cuisine.
>> 10 years ago, we ate chopped noodles.
Wow, The taste was fantastic.
Wow, The taste was fantastic.
>> And wow! it tasted fantastic.
Usually we tell it\'s \"mother\'s handtaste\"
>> We usually say it\'s \"mother\'s handtaste\"
Thank you Gabby!
Thank you Gabby!
>> Correct.
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