My best friend,Je-min
학생이 쓴 원문
My best friend,Je-min live in Seoul,Korea.
She like playing with her friend.
I sometimes play with her in my home.
She is 9 years old.
And she is se\'nd grad class of 5.
I like her so much.
She is 123cm tall.
And I\'m 128cm tall.
She have smart phone.
I like her.
We have friendship-ring.
We are going to do best friend each other^^:););]:]
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My best friend,Je-min live in Seoul,Korea.
>> My best friend, Je-min lives in Seoul, Korea.
She like playing with her friend.
>> She likes playing together with her friend.
I sometimes play with her in my home.
>> I sometimes play together with her in my home.
She is 9 years old. And she is se\'nd grad class of 5.
>> She is 9 years old and is in 5th (fifth) grade.
I like her so much.
>> CORRECT~~
She is 123 cm tall. And I\'m 128cm tall.
>> She is 123 cm tall and I\'m 128 cm tall.
She have smart phone.
>> She has a smart phone.
I like her.
>> CORRECT~~
We have friendship-ring.
>> We have a friendship-ring.
We are going to do best friend each other^^:););]:]
>> We are each other\'s best friends.
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