My best hero
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, A-Rim! Thank you so much for sharing about this. This is heartwarming. I am sure your parents would be so glad to hear that you consider them as your heroes!
~ Teacher Marie
I had stereotype that hero is must be a person who have great achievements.
>> I had stereotyped that a hero must be a person who has great achievements.
However after the class, I think that my parents are my heros.
>> However, after the class, I thought my parents are my heroes.
OR: However, after the class, I realized that my parents are my heroes.
Most of people think that a person who have awsome achievements seems great.
>> Most people think that a person who has awesome achievements is great.
Of course, I agree that, but I think my parent are the best in all around the world.
>> Of course I agree with that, but I think my parents are the best in the world.
From now on, my parents are my best hero and my hero will never be changed forever!
>> From now on, my parents are my heroes and that will never ever change!
I haven’t think about this topic, so I think I have meaningful time for a while.
>> I haven\'t thought about this before, so I think I had a meaningful time thinking for a while.
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