My best memorable task 1

2012-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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One of my best memorable tasks is to hold a demonstration classroom as a real teacher in front of my students, principle and trainer and trainee teachers of middle school where I graduated. The reason why I had to do the task is because it is the essential course of my major of my university. The institution has majors of English as well as Education course and I took both courses. If I graduate both courses then I have to go to middle or high school to learn how to teach for 4 weeks. So I decided to go to middle school from which I graduated. And there were seven trainee teachers including me. The school gave us the demonstration classroom task. However, the task should be taken up by one of us. Although I volunteered the task, I was very nervous because the class should be different from traditional classes. I had to show what I researched about the class by myself. So I decided to make the class interesting by adding acting in movies.

강사 첨삭

Hello my brother [이름]! You were able to express yourself quite good in your composition with minimal corrections. Keep up polishing your written skill. This will help you improve better in your speaking skill as you are able to practice thinking in English. Anyway, I have to give you a round of applause because of your demonstration. Good job! I told you once that you have to do the things that you really want to do. You too much passion in teaching so go for the gold brother! I am very proud of you! I am looking forward talking with you in our class. Have a great night! --T. Chloe-- One of my best memorable tasks is to hold a demonstration classroom as a real teacher in front of my students, principle and trainer and trainee teachers of middle school where I graduated. >>> One of my best memorable tasks was when I had a classroom demonstration as a real teacher in front of my students, the principal, the trainers and trainee teachers in the middle school where I graduated. The reason why I had to do the task is because it is the essential course of my major of my university. >>> The reason why I had to do the task was because it is an essential course of my major in my university. The institution has majors of English as well as Education course and I took both courses. >>>The institution has English majors as well as Education courses and I took both courses. If I graduate both courses then I have to go to middle or high school to learn how to teach for 4 weeks. >>> If I will graduate both courses, I have to go to middle schools or high schools to learn how to teach for four weeks. So I decided to go to middle school from which I graduated. >>> So I decided to go to the middle school where I graduated. >>>  So I decided to go to the middle from which I graduated. And there were seven trainee teachers including me. >>> Correct >>> We were seven trainee teachers. The school gave us the demonstration classroom task. >>> The school gave us classroom demonstration tasks. However, the task should be taken up by one of us. >>> Correct >>> However, one of us should take up the task.Although I volunteered the task, I was very nervous because the class should be different from traditional classes. >>> Although I volunteered to do the task, I was very nervous because the class methodology should be different from traditional classes. I had to show what I researched about the class by myself. >>> Correct So I decided to make the class interesting by adding acting in movies. >>> So I decided to make the class interesting by adding acting lessons in movies. >>> OR: So I decided to make the class interesting by adding role play.

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