My best memorable task 3
학생이 쓴 원문
Finally, as soon as the class finished, I received a standing ovation from observers as well as my students. At the evaluation meeting, I got many phrases from principle and teachers. After the meeting, when I came back to my classroom, I was really surprised because students prepared surprise party for me! I got their letters and gifts from homeroom teacher. I can’t forget this event and the task forever. Thank you for listening.
강사 첨삭
Hi again there my brother [이름]! Thank you so much for this composition. I think I have to gather some of my friends to give you a standing ovation too. Hahaha! I had fun reading all your compositions. Send me more essays, I\'d love to read them all. Hahaha! Anyway, have a good night. Take a sound sleep. I will talk to you tomorrow brother! I miss you!
-Teacher CHLOE
Finally, as soon as the class finished, I received a standing ovation from observers as well as my students.
>> Finally, as the soon as the class was finished, I received a standing ovation from all of my students and observers.
At the evaluation meeting, I got many phrases from principle and teachers.
>> During the evaluation meeting, I got numerous feedbacks from the principal and the teachers.
After the meeting, when I came back to my classroom, I was really surprised because students prepared surprise party for me!
>> After the meeting, I went back to the classroom and to my surprise, the students prepared a party for me!
>> After the meeting, I went back to the classroom and to my surprise, the students threw out a party for me!
I got their letters and gifts from homeroom teacher. I can’t forget this event and the task forever. Thank you for listening.
>> I got letters and gifts from the homeroom teacher. I will not forget this event and task in my life.
>> Thank you for listening.
>> Thank you for reading my composition.
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