My best part
학생이 쓴 원문
I like my eyes.
Because, I think my eyes have atractive.
I don\'t have double eyelid, but I have big eyes that are torn.
The reason why I\'m proud is because my mom told me \'I like your eyes shape. So, You don\'t think the idea of surgery.
As a result, I think best part of my face is eyes.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jady!
I mentioned some new expressions below.
Try using them in multiple sentences.
You can tell me what you practiced.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like my eyes.
>> Correct
Because, I think my eyes have atractive.
Because, I think my eyes have atractive.
>> It\'s because I think my eyes have an attractive quality.
I don\'t have double eyelid, but I have big eyes that are torn.
I don\'t have double eyelid, but I have big eyes that are torn.
>> I don\'t have double eyelids, but I have big eyes that have a crease.
The reason why I\'m proud is because my mom told me \'I like your eyes shape.
The reason why I\'m proud is because my mom told me \'I like your eyes shape.
>> The reason why I\'m proud is because my mom said \'I like the shape of your eyes.\"
So, You don\'t think the idea of surgery.
>> Don\'t even think about getting surgery on your eyes.
As a result, I think best part of my face is eyes.
As a result, I think best part of my face is eyes.
>> Therefore, I think the best part of my face is my eyes.
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