My best restaurant in Korea.

2024-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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I think ‘TAEPYEONGSOGUKBAP’ is best restaurant in Korea. Because, They have very very delicious menu of Korean Food. The restaurant is been in Deajeon. Deajeon is my hometown. (I’m live in [이름]ul now) So, I had meal in there when I visited Deajeon every moments. Best menu is ‘so-gukbap’ that boil cow bone in soup. Put rice into soup and eat it. I really really like it. I recommend you this restaurant!

강사 첨삭

Wow! I suddenly feel like trying it for breakfast now, Da[이름]! You gave a wonderful description of its taste.-Faith-
I think ‘TAEPYEONGSOGUKBAP’ is best restaurant in Korea. Because, They have very very delicious menu of Korean Food.
>> I think Taepyeongso Gukbap is the best restaurant in Korea because they offer a very delicious menu of Korean Food.
The restaurant is been in Deajeon.
>> The restaurant is located in Deajeon.
Deajeon is my hometown. (I’m live in [이름]ul now)
>> Daejeon is my hometown, but I’m living in [이름]ul now.
So, I had meal in there when I visited Deajeon every moments.
>> Therefore, I always had a meal there when I visited Daejeon.
Best menu is ‘so-gukbap’ that boil cow bone in soup.
>> Their best dish is \'so-gukbap,\' which is made by boiling cow bones in soup.
Put rice into soup and eat it.
>> We put rice into the soup and eat it.
I really really like it.
>> I really, really like it.
OR I absolutely love it.
I recommend you this restaurant!
>> I recommend you try this restaurant!

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