My best story from a wedding.

2017-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Marriage is the greatest blessing and biggest event in a person's life. Marriage should be the union between one man and one woman. They have sometimes had fights with each other, sometimes full of lots of love. And then, couples accumulate love with each other. I don't think there is a perfect couple from the beginning. marriage is the process of getting along with each other. I got my wife through marriage. That is the best story in my life. And, I have also had two sons through my wife. That is a blessing, too. Of course, I had fought with my with many time. Sometimes we shout high to each other, and sometimes my wife had cried. Through the process, they learn each other more. I think one(man) plus one(woman) equals two+alpha. Marriage itself is my best story.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!(\",)

I\'m happy to see your composition today. What happened to you yesterday? Marriage is not for me as you know. But I believe that if a person decides to get married then he/she must be ready to accept and love both the good things and the bad things about his/her life partner. Before saying I do, both the bride and the groom should be really sure they can be together for life. Am I right?(\",)

Take care!(\",)

~T. Lynn

Marriage is the greatest blessing and biggest event in a person\'s life.

>> correct!

Marriage should be the union between one man and one woman.

>> correct!

They have sometimes had fights with each other, sometimes full of lots of love.

>> They sometimes have fights and sometimes they are full of  love.

And then, couples accumulate love with each other.

>> And then the couple will learn to love each other more.

I don\'t think there is a perfect couple from the beginning.

>> correct!

Marriage is the process of getting along with each other.

>> correct!

OR>> Marriage is the process of learning how to get along with each other.

I got my wife through marriage.

>> correct!

That is the best story in my life.

>> That is the best story of my life!

And, I have also had two sons through my wife. That is a blessing, too.

>> And, I also have two sons through my wife. That is a blessing, too.

Of course, I had fought with my with many time.

>> Of course I had fought with her many times.

Sometimes we shout high to each other, and sometimes my wife had cried.

>> Sometimes we shout loudly to each other, and sometimes I had made my wife cry.

Through the process, they learn each other more. I think one(man) plus one(woman) equals two+alpha.

>> Through the process, we learn about each other more. I think one(man) plus one(woman) equals two alphas.

Marriage itself is my best story.

>> correct!

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