My best story from a wedding.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!(\",)
I\'m happy to see your composition today. What happened to you yesterday? Marriage is not for me as you know. But I believe that if a person decides to get married then he/she must be ready to accept and love both the good things and the bad things about his/her life partner. Before saying I do, both the bride and the groom should be really sure they can be together for life. Am I right?(\",)
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
Marriage is the greatest blessing and biggest event in a person\'s life.
>> correct!
Marriage should be the union between one man and one woman.
>> correct!
They have sometimes had fights with each other, sometimes full of lots of love.
>> They sometimes have fights and sometimes they are full of love.
And then, couples accumulate love with each other.
>> And then the couple will learn to love each other more.
I don\'t think there is a perfect couple from the beginning.
>> correct!
Marriage is the process of getting along with each other.
>> correct!
OR>> Marriage is the process of learning how to get along with each other.
I got my wife through marriage.
>> correct!
That is the best story in my life.
>> That is the best story of my life!
And, I have also had two sons through my wife. That is a blessing, too.
>> And, I also have two sons through my wife. That is a blessing, too.
Of course, I had fought with my with many time.
>> Of course I had fought with her many times.
Sometimes we shout high to each other, and sometimes my wife had cried.
>> Sometimes we shout loudly to each other, and sometimes I had made my wife cry.
Through the process, they learn each other more. I think one(man) plus one(woman) equals two+alpha.
>> Through the process, we learn about each other more. I think one(man) plus one(woman) equals two alphas.
Marriage itself is my best story.
>> correct!
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