My best teacher

2013-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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It was on my 7th or 8th grade when she came to our school and started her career, right after graduating from university, as a teacher teaching Korean. Although she was not allotted to our class, I came across her occasionally when I stepped in the teachers’ office. Although she was a new teacher, her enthusiasm and true compassion toward her students were just great. She encouraged us all the time to read many books that would become our valuable asset to grow to be a great adult. After middle school, I had to leave my hometown and parents to go to high school in Seoul. The most unforgettable thing was that she wrote the four pages of personal letter to my new homeroom teacher in high school. In the letter, she showed her love toward me as my teacher. She elaborated on my characteristics, how sincere I was, how sensitive I was, and asked him to take good care of me since I had to live in dormitory myself. I burst into tears when I read the letter and was so touched.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]^^ Wow! That was so sweet! I suddenly remembered my highschool teacher. Do you still keep in touch with your teacher? Your composition was full of feelings about your teacher. You were able to imaprt your ideas in a very good way. Keep your ideas flowing! Keep on writing! I am so proud to say that your writing skills are improving! Keep it up! See you in class! We can talk more about this topic later. Teacher Nina It was on my 7th or 8th grade when she came to our school and started her career, right after graduating from university, as a teacher teaching Korean. >> Correct! >> OR: I was on my seventh of eighth grade when she came to our school and started her career after being a teacher teaching Koreans. Although she was not allotted to our class, I came across her occasionally when I stepped in the teachers’ office. >> Correct! >> OR : Although she was not a part of our our class, I came across her occasionally when I stepped in the teacher\'s office. Although she was a new teacher, her enthusiasm and true compassion toward her students were just great. >> Although she was a new teacher, her enthusiasm and compassion toward her students were great. She encouraged us all the time to read many books that would become our valuable asset to grow to be a great adult. >> Correct! >> OR: She encouraged us all the time to read many books that would become our valuable asset when we become adult. After middle school, I had to leave my hometown and parents to go to high school in Seoul. >> Correct! >> OR: After middle school, I had to move to Seoul and leave my parents and hometown to go to high school. The most unforgettable thing was that she wrote the four pages of personal letter to my new homeroom teacher in high school. >> The most unforgettable thing was when she wrote four pages of personal letter to my new homeroom teacher in high school. In the letter, she showed her love toward me as my teacher. >> In the letter, she expressed her love towards me as my teacher. She elaborated on my characteristics, how sincere I was, how sensitive I was, and asked him to take good care of me since I had to live in dormitory myself. >> She elaborated my characteristics, how sincere I was, how sensitive I was and she asked my new teacher to take good care fo me since I had to live in a dormitory by myself. I burst into tears when I read the letter and was so touched. >> Did you mean: I was so touched so I bursted into tears when I read the letter.

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