My best trip in middle school
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Hi, A-Rim! Thank you for sharing about your best trip in middle school. I would be thrilled to go to a place like that, too. I am sure you had a wonderful time!
~ Teacher Marie
When I was first grade in middle school, I went to trip with my friends who involve in student government.
>> When I was in frist grade middle school, I went to a trip with my friends who were also involved in the student government.
OR: When I was a first grader in middle school, I went to a trip with my friends from the student government.
The whether was pretty good, because it was fall.
>> The weather that day was pretty good because it was in fall.
Also, I made soap that is good for our skin.
>> CORRECT.
OR: I also made soap that is good for our skin.
It was very interesting.
>> CORRECT.
If I have a chance, I want to go there with my friends again.
>> CORRECT.
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