My Bestfriend
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Grace. I Checked every day your answering for my grammar error.
Thank you for your attention me.
My Bestfriend.
I have two bestfriend. one is teacher in yeonsu elementary school. another one is
underwriter(insurance company) in bucheon.
sung-wook(teacher) is a word magician. He is very funny. so, when he meet the
woman who didn't met before, he can she very happy for his talk.
My another friends name is Dong-ki who is good man to me. Because he has a big ear. When i talk to about my Job, Concious and anything, he is very interested in my talk. For these reasons, I love them.
The end.
It's my first time to writing to you.
I'm some shy. ^^;; Have a good weekend.
강사 첨삭
Hi Daniel! Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s my pleasure to talk to you. Next year, you will be finishing your major, I hope we\'re still together when that happens. ^^ Just be patient with your studies and always hope for the best. Have a great weekend too Daniel! See you on Monday! Cheerios!
teacher GRACE *.*
Hi, Grace. I Checked every day your answering for my grammar error.
>> Hi Grace! I check your corrections for me everyday.Thank you for your attention me.>> Thank you for giving me attention. My Bestfriend.
>> \"My Bestfriend\"I have two bestfriend. one is teacher in yeonsu elementary school. another one is underwriter(insurance company) in bucheon.
>> I have two bestfriends. One of them is teacher in Yeonsu Elementary School and the other one is an underwriter for an insurance company in Bucheon.sung-wook(teacher) is a word magician. He is very funny. so, when he meet the woman who didn\'t met before, he can she very happy for his talk.
>> Sung-wook, my bestfriend who\'s a teacher is a good magician. He is very funny so I think if he meets the special woman of his life, he can make her very happy.My another friends name is Dong-ki who is good man to me. Because he has a big ear.
>> Dong-ki, my other friend, is a very kind friend to me. He has big ears.
When i talk to about my Job, Concious and anything, he is very interested in my talk. For these reasons, I love them. >> When I talk to him about my job, he listens carefully and is very interested with what I am telling him. For these reasons, I love my bestfriends.The end. >> CorrectIt\'s my first time to writing to you.
>> This is my first time to write a composition.I\'m some shy. ^^;; Have a good weekend.
>> I\'m a little bit shy. Have a good weekend!
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