My bestfriend
학생이 쓴 원문
my bestfriend is very tall, wear geyeglass and have big mouth.
He is very kind . He likes to read books and he is very good at
playing games he is professional in computergame.
He have very high IQ.
강사 첨삭
Hi John,
Thank you for describing your bestfriend to me. I wonder how he'd describe you.
Have a great day.
- Teacher May -
my bestfriend is very tall, wear geyeglass and have big mouth.>>My bestfriend is very tall, he wear eyeglasses and have a big mouth.He is very kind .
>>CORRECT
He likes to read books and he is very good at playing games.
>>CORRECT
he is professional in computergame.>>He seems to be a professional gamer.He have very high IQ.
>>His IQ is very high.
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